Although they were flesh'd villains, bloody dogs,
Melting with tenderness and kind compassion
Wept like two children in their deaths' sad stories.
King Richard III, Act 4, Scene 3
So, having finally purchased a copy, I decided to go ahead and try to write Marius up using Dogs in the Vineyard.
At first I had considered writing him with "Complicated Community" as my background, given the line, "Choose this if you want your character to be socially vulnerable or from a broken, in-crisis, or destructive family." After all, that pretty much sets it down for any traditional post-Patternfall Amber campaign. On the other hand, looking at that gives him far too much in the way of relationship dice and since most of the people ARE family, he gets to claim them at a 1d6 anyway, unless he has another defined relationship. So I went with my instincts instead and chose a "Complicated History."
His stats were fairly simple:
Acuity: 4d6
Body: 4d6
Heart: 2d6
Will: 5d6
Obviously, his "heart" trait is at the minimum. I thought about adding one to Acuity, but the one I'd have to take out would have been from Body, and realistically, he became a knight out of martial prowess as well as position, so I thought the balance worked out right.
For his traits, I struggled a little, but this is what I think I like:
"Terribly interested in (magical) powers." 1d10
"Bad relationships, especially with women." 2d4
"Doesn't care about the identity of his father." 1d4
"Raised to be a King." 1d6
"Thinks that asking forgiveness is a lot better than permission." 1d4
"Fights ambidextrously with knives." 1d10
"Took the Pattern with eyes wide open." 1d6
Going down the list, he's more of a dabbler in Powers right now. He doesn't want to use them so much as understand the precepts behind them, so that when he does initiate into them, he'll have a foundation to use them in New And Interesting Ways. His bad relationships with women are, um, obvious. (See his "Heart" stat.) He doesn't care who his father is. If it's someone in the Family, "Oooh squick." If it's someone who isn't Family? Oh well. If it's someone of importance, he feels he'd have been left with what was necessary to make that connection at some point. He was raised to be a King, irregardless of ancestry, and that actually is, to some point, how he treats his Knights, and how he makes decisions. Of course, the next piece is how he manages to make his own way. The knife thing is pretty much what I got out of the previous writer's excerpts in Chaos; Marius slashes. He gets a battle high. He's good with knives. And, of course, the latter indicates his Pattern ability. Not this, "snuck off in the middle of the night," kind of stuff; he expected it. (Not that Pride is a Marius sin or anything.)
As for relationship dice, his most important relationships right now are probably Caine, Ossian, and Ce'e. I thought 1d8 for Caine and Ce'e just because he's intent on learning this Lord of Chaos stuff for Cloudeater. If he was spending dice on family, the dice he'd spend would be for Ossian, Paige, Brennan, and Aisling, then one on his knight Tempest. He'd take two free "family" dice for Corwin and Deirdre.
Ask me again next time I reread the rules, though, and I might change my mind. For example, there's nothing about Trump in there...
Comments (2)
The traits are interesting. I hadn't thought of the knives as being so important to the character.
If it were a Dogs game I was GMing, I'd make you rewrite the Bad Relationships one to be a little more evocative because I think it would make play easier.
As for Trump, why not take a Relationship with Trump? That could be very interesting.
Posted by Claire Bickell | September 25, 2005 5:51 AM
Posted on September 25, 2005 05:51
Every time I block him in a scene, I think, "Where are his knives?" and while his smile is more obvious, I think about them whenever he moves his hands. So I think it's something I know as player but hasn't really come out in character as much as I'd like.
Yeah, I thought about the same thing, but he hasn't actually played through any relationship in game unless you count Aisling. [laughing]
A relationship with Trump? I had actually considered that, starting with Pattern instead of a trait die. I should also have added a relationship to the Knights. Ah well. Maybe next time. [grinning]
Posted by MT Fierce | September 26, 2005 12:34 PM
Posted on September 26, 2005 12:34